Description This poem reflects on profound thoughts and spiritual musings while the poet partakes in a simple, mundane activityâeating a slice of pizza. The juxtaposition of the ordinary with the extraordinary serves to emphasize the depth of the poet’s contemplation. The poem begins by introducing the concept of an “unseen Perfection,” a divine or transcendent
Description This poem offers a contemplative glimpse into the poet’s mind as they engage in everyday activities. The poem begins with the poet reflecting deeply while eating a slice of pizza, contemplating their spiritual fate. They reject the idea of going to hell and express a preference for going to heaven, demonstrating reverence and seeking
When itâs time to unplug, my mind, body, and soul warn me in advance that it’s time to rest. During my resting hours, I have been writing constantly for the past few years, which has helped me ease my mind. I am an overthinker, which is a bad habit I really need to stop because
Description This poem explores the deceptive nature of lust, contrasting its initial allure with its eventual destructiveness. It begins with an idealized perception of lust, likening it to a beautiful, innocent woman whose gaze captivates the narrator. This initial portrayal emphasizes the superficial charm and attractiveness of lust. However, the poem takes a darker turn
Here is the refined version of your text with grammar corrections: Loyalty and honesty are the most important qualities I look for in friendships and relationships with women. Without loyalty and honesty, relationships will eventually crumble like the 9/11 buildings.
don’t believe in religion because many teach that by your own might and power, you shall attain a heavenly spot. This is far from the truth because, without being perfect, your chance of getting to heaven is nearly impossible. Christianity is unique in that it provides access to God through our mediator, Jesus Christ of
Description This poem captures an intense, almost obsessive affection from a woman towards the speaker. She explains her obsession by revealing that she perceives him as wearing a “violet mask,” likening him to Prince, whose iconic presence is both captivating and enigmatic. In her world, his “purple presence” reigns supreme, making him irresistible to her.
Description This poem delves into the speaker’s admiration and reverence for a woman whose beauty and spirit are depicted through rich, evocative imagery. The speaker views the woman through “spiritual lenses,” suggesting a deep, soulful connection and perception that goes beyond the physical. The woman’s heart is described as “violet” and “resembles a diamond,” combining
Description This poem explores the relationship between talent and the pursuit of artistic excellence, emphasizing that talent alone is insufficient for achieving greatness. The narrator begins by recognizing that merely possessing talent does not guarantee the ability to create enduring, impactful art (“Talent isnât never enough when you trying to make the artistry infinitely blush
Description “Elle Aime la Mort” is a poignant and thought-provoking poem that personifies death as a tangible, intimate being. The speaker recounts an encounter with a woman who expresses a deep, almost romantic yearning for death, envisioning it as a lover with whom she can share both physical and spiritual intimacy. Her words, “if you
As I sit here, pen in hand, my thoughts drift to the electric pulse of the club, a place where the world blurs into a haze of lights and rhythm. Itâs a space where I find myself searching, chasing something fleetingâa spark, a connection, a moment of lust that feels like it could ignite my very soul. I confess, my heart is restless, caught in a dance between longing and surrender. My mind lingers on the club, where shadows and desires intertwine. Iâm drawn to the allure of someone who captivates me, someone whose presence sets my spirit ablaze.
I look to her, to that fleeting dream of passion, hoping to hold onto something real before time erodes me. I fear that without herâwithout that fireâmy soul might crumble, turning to dust in the quiet of unfulfilled yearning. In her hands, I imagine a world where desire breathes life into me. She is the one I dream of, the one who could mould my fleeting hopes into something eternal. Yet, thereâs a weight to this longing, a fear that my spirit might harden, turning to crust under the pressure of wanting what may never be mine. This is my confession, my truth laid bare. The club is more than a placeâitâs a mirror of my heartâs quiet ache, a reminder of the fire I seek and the fragility of my own spirit. I write this to you because you, more than anyone, might understand this restless search for something that feels like forever.
Description This poem reflects on profound thoughts and spiritual musings while the poet partakes in a simple, mundane activityâeating a slice of pizza. The juxtaposition of the ordinary with the extraordinary serves to emphasize the depth of the poet’s contemplation. The poem begins by introducing the concept of an “unseen Perfection,” a divine or transcendent
Description This poem offers a contemplative glimpse into the poet’s mind as they engage in everyday activities. The poem begins with the poet reflecting deeply while eating a slice of pizza, contemplating their spiritual fate. They reject the idea of going to hell and express a preference for going to heaven, demonstrating reverence and seeking
When itâs time to unplug, my mind, body, and soul warn me in advance that it’s time to rest. During my resting hours, I have been writing constantly for the past few years, which has helped me ease my mind. I am an overthinker, which is a bad habit I really need to stop because
Description This poem explores the deceptive nature of lust, contrasting its initial allure with its eventual destructiveness. It begins with an idealized perception of lust, likening it to a beautiful, innocent woman whose gaze captivates the narrator. This initial portrayal emphasizes the superficial charm and attractiveness of lust. However, the poem takes a darker turn
Here is the refined version of your text with grammar corrections: Loyalty and honesty are the most important qualities I look for in friendships and relationships with women. Without loyalty and honesty, relationships will eventually crumble like the 9/11 buildings.
don’t believe in religion because many teach that by your own might and power, you shall attain a heavenly spot. This is far from the truth because, without being perfect, your chance of getting to heaven is nearly impossible. Christianity is unique in that it provides access to God through our mediator, Jesus Christ of
Description This poem captures an intense, almost obsessive affection from a woman towards the speaker. She explains her obsession by revealing that she perceives him as wearing a “violet mask,” likening him to Prince, whose iconic presence is both captivating and enigmatic. In her world, his “purple presence” reigns supreme, making him irresistible to her.
Description This poem delves into the speaker’s admiration and reverence for a woman whose beauty and spirit are depicted through rich, evocative imagery. The speaker views the woman through “spiritual lenses,” suggesting a deep, soulful connection and perception that goes beyond the physical. The woman’s heart is described as “violet” and “resembles a diamond,” combining
Description This poem explores the relationship between talent and the pursuit of artistic excellence, emphasizing that talent alone is insufficient for achieving greatness. The narrator begins by recognizing that merely possessing talent does not guarantee the ability to create enduring, impactful art (“Talent isnât never enough when you trying to make the artistry infinitely blush
Description “Elle Aime la Mort” is a poignant and thought-provoking poem that personifies death as a tangible, intimate being. The speaker recounts an encounter with a woman who expresses a deep, almost romantic yearning for death, envisioning it as a lover with whom she can share both physical and spiritual intimacy. Her words, “if you
Description This poem reflects on profound thoughts and spiritual musings while the poet partakes in a simple, mundane activityâeating a slice of pizza. The juxtaposition of the ordinary with the extraordinary serves to emphasize the depth of the poet’s contemplation. The poem begins by introducing the concept of an “unseen Perfection,” a divine or transcendent
Description This poem offers a contemplative glimpse into the poet’s mind as they engage in everyday activities. The poem begins with the poet reflecting deeply while eating a slice of pizza, contemplating their spiritual fate. They reject the idea of going to hell and express a preference for going to heaven, demonstrating reverence and seeking
When itâs time to unplug, my mind, body, and soul warn me in advance that it’s time to rest. During my resting hours, I have been writing constantly for the past few years, which has helped me ease my mind. I am an overthinker, which is a bad habit I really need to stop because
Description This poem explores the deceptive nature of lust, contrasting its initial allure with its eventual destructiveness. It begins with an idealized perception of lust, likening it to a beautiful, innocent woman whose gaze captivates the narrator. This initial portrayal emphasizes the superficial charm and attractiveness of lust. However, the poem takes a darker turn
Here is the refined version of your text with grammar corrections: Loyalty and honesty are the most important qualities I look for in friendships and relationships with women. Without loyalty and honesty, relationships will eventually crumble like the 9/11 buildings.
don’t believe in religion because many teach that by your own might and power, you shall attain a heavenly spot. This is far from the truth because, without being perfect, your chance of getting to heaven is nearly impossible. Christianity is unique in that it provides access to God through our mediator, Jesus Christ of
Description This poem captures an intense, almost obsessive affection from a woman towards the speaker. She explains her obsession by revealing that she perceives him as wearing a “violet mask,” likening him to Prince, whose iconic presence is both captivating and enigmatic. In her world, his “purple presence” reigns supreme, making him irresistible to her.
Description This poem delves into the speaker’s admiration and reverence for a woman whose beauty and spirit are depicted through rich, evocative imagery. The speaker views the woman through “spiritual lenses,” suggesting a deep, soulful connection and perception that goes beyond the physical. The woman’s heart is described as “violet” and “resembles a diamond,” combining
Description This poem explores the relationship between talent and the pursuit of artistic excellence, emphasizing that talent alone is insufficient for achieving greatness. The narrator begins by recognizing that merely possessing talent does not guarantee the ability to create enduring, impactful art (“Talent isnât never enough when you trying to make the artistry infinitely blush
Description “Elle Aime la Mort” is a poignant and thought-provoking poem that personifies death as a tangible, intimate being. The speaker recounts an encounter with a woman who expresses a deep, almost romantic yearning for death, envisioning it as a lover with whom she can share both physical and spiritual intimacy. Her words, “if you
I was bored one day and i was amazed by @jid feature on a track called fried rice by @bas and I thought let me write something over @jid flow just for fun. #LATA
Description This poem reflects on profound thoughts and spiritual musings while the poet partakes in a simple, mundane activityâeating a slice of pizza. The juxtaposition of the ordinary with the extraordinary serves to emphasize the depth of the poet’s contemplation. The poem begins by introducing the concept of an “unseen Perfection,” a divine or transcendent
Description This poem offers a contemplative glimpse into the poet’s mind as they engage in everyday activities. The poem begins with the poet reflecting deeply while eating a slice of pizza, contemplating their spiritual fate. They reject the idea of going to hell and express a preference for going to heaven, demonstrating reverence and seeking
When itâs time to unplug, my mind, body, and soul warn me in advance that it’s time to rest. During my resting hours, I have been writing constantly for the past few years, which has helped me ease my mind. I am an overthinker, which is a bad habit I really need to stop because
Description This poem explores the deceptive nature of lust, contrasting its initial allure with its eventual destructiveness. It begins with an idealized perception of lust, likening it to a beautiful, innocent woman whose gaze captivates the narrator. This initial portrayal emphasizes the superficial charm and attractiveness of lust. However, the poem takes a darker turn
Here is the refined version of your text with grammar corrections: Loyalty and honesty are the most important qualities I look for in friendships and relationships with women. Without loyalty and honesty, relationships will eventually crumble like the 9/11 buildings.
don’t believe in religion because many teach that by your own might and power, you shall attain a heavenly spot. This is far from the truth because, without being perfect, your chance of getting to heaven is nearly impossible. Christianity is unique in that it provides access to God through our mediator, Jesus Christ of
Description This poem captures an intense, almost obsessive affection from a woman towards the speaker. She explains her obsession by revealing that she perceives him as wearing a “violet mask,” likening him to Prince, whose iconic presence is both captivating and enigmatic. In her world, his “purple presence” reigns supreme, making him irresistible to her.
Description This poem delves into the speaker’s admiration and reverence for a woman whose beauty and spirit are depicted through rich, evocative imagery. The speaker views the woman through “spiritual lenses,” suggesting a deep, soulful connection and perception that goes beyond the physical. The woman’s heart is described as “violet” and “resembles a diamond,” combining
Description This poem explores the relationship between talent and the pursuit of artistic excellence, emphasizing that talent alone is insufficient for achieving greatness. The narrator begins by recognizing that merely possessing talent does not guarantee the ability to create enduring, impactful art (“Talent isnât never enough when you trying to make the artistry infinitely blush
Description “Elle Aime la Mort” is a poignant and thought-provoking poem that personifies death as a tangible, intimate being. The speaker recounts an encounter with a woman who expresses a deep, almost romantic yearning for death, envisioning it as a lover with whom she can share both physical and spiritual intimacy. Her words, “if you
Description This poem reflects on profound thoughts and spiritual musings while the poet partakes in a simple, mundane activityâeating a slice of pizza. The juxtaposition of the ordinary with the extraordinary serves to emphasize the depth of the poet’s contemplation. The poem begins by introducing the concept of an “unseen Perfection,” a divine or transcendent
Description This poem offers a contemplative glimpse into the poet’s mind as they engage in everyday activities. The poem begins with the poet reflecting deeply while eating a slice of pizza, contemplating their spiritual fate. They reject the idea of going to hell and express a preference for going to heaven, demonstrating reverence and seeking
When itâs time to unplug, my mind, body, and soul warn me in advance that it’s time to rest. During my resting hours, I have been writing constantly for the past few years, which has helped me ease my mind. I am an overthinker, which is a bad habit I really need to stop because
Description This poem explores the deceptive nature of lust, contrasting its initial allure with its eventual destructiveness. It begins with an idealized perception of lust, likening it to a beautiful, innocent woman whose gaze captivates the narrator. This initial portrayal emphasizes the superficial charm and attractiveness of lust. However, the poem takes a darker turn
Here is the refined version of your text with grammar corrections: Loyalty and honesty are the most important qualities I look for in friendships and relationships with women. Without loyalty and honesty, relationships will eventually crumble like the 9/11 buildings.
don’t believe in religion because many teach that by your own might and power, you shall attain a heavenly spot. This is far from the truth because, without being perfect, your chance of getting to heaven is nearly impossible. Christianity is unique in that it provides access to God through our mediator, Jesus Christ of
Description This poem captures an intense, almost obsessive affection from a woman towards the speaker. She explains her obsession by revealing that she perceives him as wearing a “violet mask,” likening him to Prince, whose iconic presence is both captivating and enigmatic. In her world, his “purple presence” reigns supreme, making him irresistible to her.
Description This poem delves into the speaker’s admiration and reverence for a woman whose beauty and spirit are depicted through rich, evocative imagery. The speaker views the woman through “spiritual lenses,” suggesting a deep, soulful connection and perception that goes beyond the physical. The woman’s heart is described as “violet” and “resembles a diamond,” combining
Description This poem explores the relationship between talent and the pursuit of artistic excellence, emphasizing that talent alone is insufficient for achieving greatness. The narrator begins by recognizing that merely possessing talent does not guarantee the ability to create enduring, impactful art (“Talent isnât never enough when you trying to make the artistry infinitely blush
Description “Elle Aime la Mort” is a poignant and thought-provoking poem that personifies death as a tangible, intimate being. The speaker recounts an encounter with a woman who expresses a deep, almost romantic yearning for death, envisioning it as a lover with whom she can share both physical and spiritual intimacy. Her words, “if you
I blaze through the streets, my heart pounding, seeking those I once called my best friendsâfriends who betrayed me, their masks peeling away to reveal fragments of lust, loafing, guilt, and shame. Their deception trapped me in a âhappy illusion,â but now, with wrath born from the abyss of my heart, I confront the wreckage of trust and the question of redemption. This raw, visceral poem is my story, urging me to explore philosophically what betrayal has done to my sense of self, how wrath has shaped my response, and whether I can find redemption without losing my soul. Drawing from existentialism, Stoicism, and ethical thought, I reflect on my journey through betrayal and rage, seeking answers within the ashes.
Betrayal and the Unmasking of My Illusions
When I saw their masks peel away, exposing their lustful ease, the sting of betrayal cut deep. These werenât just friendsâthey were vices I embraced, parts of myself I refused to see. In Sartreâs terms, I was living in mauvaise foi (bad faith), hiding from the truth to cling to a comforting lie. Their betrayal forced me to confront this illusion, shattering the cage I built around myself. Now, I stand in the glare of existential angst, free yet burdened to redefine who I am without those false friends.
This unmasking wounds me but also offers a gift. As Nietzsche might urge, Iâm peeling away false identities to approach my authentic self, untainted by deception. But the cost is heavy: years wasted, blinded by their intentions. I face a choiceâcling to the ruins of my old self or forge a new path, knowing betrayal has revealed not just their falsehoods but my own complicity in them.
Wrath as My Response
From the âwrathful abyssâ of my heart, rage erupts. I donât just feel angerâI act on it, methodically taking out Steel (Loafing), Raheem (Guilt), and Q (Shame) with bullets to the heart, head, and chest. This isnât blind fury but a deliberate purge, a claim to agency. Existentially, Iâm asserting my freedom, refusing to remain a victim. Yet, Senecaâs Stoic warning echoes: wrath is a âtemporary madnessâ that clouds reason. By âdisconnecting my morals from my heart,â I risk becoming Nietzscheâs âpale criminal,â powerful in action but hollowed out by moral loss.
My wrath is a double-edged sword. It liberates me from the grip of vice, but it leaves me âlost in [a] charred room.â Iâve destroyed the external symbols of my flaws, but have I freed myself, or have I traded one cage for another? The bravery I feel is real, but it teeters on the edge of self-destruction, forcing me to question whether this path leads to empowerment or ruin.
Redemption or Self-Destruction?
Alone in my charred room, I contemplate purging wrath itself by âseparating my body from my soul,â baptizing myself with âa bullet to the head, without holding back.â This chilling thought feels like both despair and a twisted hope for redemption. In Camusâ absurd, Iâm caught between seeking meaning and facing its absence. My desire to purge wrath suggests a longing to transcend my corrupted state, but the methodâself-annihilationâmakes me pause. Stoicism, through Marcus Aurelius, urges me to master my passions, not destroy myself: âYou have power over your mindânot outside events.â Yet, the idea of âbaptizing my soulâ hints at Kierkegaardâs leap of faith, a surrender to something beyond reason.
The ambiguityâwhether I follow through or merely contemplate this actâleaves me wondering if redemption lies in self-awareness rather than a final bullet. Have I the courage to reintegrate my fragmented soul, or will I remain lost in this charred aftermath?
Ethical Reflections on My Fragmented Soul
Killing my personified vicesâloafing, guilt, shameâfeels like purging my flaws, but itâs also a form of scapegoating, projecting my struggles onto others. Ethically, I wrestle with a utilitarian question: does my liberation justify the violence, the disconnection of my morals? Platoâs tripartite soul comes to mindâreason, spirit, and appetite must harmonize for virtue. My wrathful actions let spirit rule, sidelining reason and balance. Redemption, then, might mean reintegrating these parts through introspection, not more destruction. But can I rebuild what Iâve burned?
Conclusion
This poemââUnveiled Betrayal: My Wrathful Redemptionââis my confrontation with the human condition: the pain of betrayal, the fire of wrath, and the faint hope of redemption. Philosophically, it challenges me to consider how I respond to deception, both from others and within myself. Existentialism offers me freedom to redefine myself, but at the risk of moral erosion. Stoicism warns against wrathâs tyranny, urging inner mastery. The question lingers: can I escape the abyss of betrayal without losing myself, or is redemption always a baptism by fire? As I stand in my charred room, Iâm left to decide whether to rebuild or let the ashes define me.
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